introduction

today we learn about introduction pharagraph

miss zu teach our class how to make a awesome introduction.

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have seven way to make a awesome introduction:

1. rhetorical question
2. definition
3. personal example
4. contrast to the thesis statement
5. current event
6. quotation
7. facts or statistics

after that, miss zu devide we by our group.

each group, must choose one element of introduction.

my group choose definition and we also choose aids as a topic.

DEFINITION OF AIDS

Acquired immune deficiency syndrome or acquired immunodeficiency syndrome ( AIDS) is defined as a disease of the human immune system caused by the human immunodeficiency virus(HIV) known as a deadly virus that was originated in the early 80’s of the twentieth century. What do you think once you see the patient of AIDS? Do you feel scared or disgusted?.Unfortunately, many of us do not know what AIDS patients had gone through intheir lives with this disease. Some of them get the disease in advertent but some of them get it because of themselves. This disease has become a serious crisis for the whole world today. Due to the above statements, AIDS can give many bad effects to a person’s life such as it leads to fatal, it wastes money to get treatments and being ignored by the society .